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I love the concept, but what the heck is this format. It jumps around like crazy and I'm so confused!
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me to i don't see the grammar mistakes either, in fact this is one of the better translated novels I've read in a while.
the persons review was from a month ago
At least it trying a new idea vs a recycled genre
What is this? What has webnovel turned into lol, look at how they do locked chapters now. .................................................................
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I don't like this new "locked chapters ordering" so I gave this 1 star. Simply because I'm afraid that if this monetization model performed better, they'll start putting this new order of "locked chapters" model on ALL the new novels, and I'm not rich enough to survive that. at the point in time of this review, the ordering is roughly: -chapter 1-3 free -chapter 4-20 locked -chapter 21-36 free -chapter 37-40 locked
Why in the world would you lock below chapter 20, much less chapter 5. locking chapter 4 and above is foolish, and a huge waste of my time to continue reading during a trial read. This is quite frustrating too, as while I have enjoyed the first 3 chapters this is nowhere near enough unlocked content to willingly continue reading.
I don't have much to say, I just that I find it difficult to understand how an 8year old is doing all that (even if he reincarnated) and people aren't questioning his presence in the show
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The story seems interesting, but having the initial chapters blocked and the ones in the middle open prevents us from giving a better evaluation of this work, so I'm giving low marks in everything, nobody wants to risk an unknown novel.
Locked ch 4 and up = instant delete from library good book but until they stop being stupid... (delete)...........................................................................................
I liked the concept, but honestly it makes no sense to put an 8 year old kid. You could have just put 18 year old guy instead of an eight year old and it would have been quite fun. I am also seeing possible signs of grooming and underage love line forming. There are also some plotholes. The system sign in reward was missed, and there are no details given regarding how some traps were made, and how sometimes, the plot seemed to have jumped past few details. Unlike what some comments are saying, racism is not shown (at least till ch 40) other than China being where the MC was reincarnated in. But still no clue why the novel was picked with all these possible danger flags.
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