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UnDyingFear
UnDyingFearLv12yr
2022-12-22 00:53

As of now, I have read 700 chapters, and I thought it was time to write a review now. The way the story started had me hooked, being presented with an end-of-the-world scene, was something quite different from other novels. Our protagonist, Wain, is thrown into a whole new world, being the only survivor of his world. What I specifically like about this, is the fact we discover this new world together with Wain, meaning whenever we learn new information about the world so does Wain. This makes connecting with him much easier because we are in the dark as much as he is. What makes this novel even better is the mystery surrounding Wain's soul, Nameless King. The way the author unravels the truth behind Wain's power kept me hooked and unable to stop reading. This is due to the author giving us information that connects well with other things we have been told rather than random, useless information. So far I have been enjoying this novel, however, if there is one thing I had to complain about it would have to be the romance. I think the mc's girlfriend (Eva) was introduced quite badly and because of this, I didn't really feel a sense of satisfaction when the mc and she started their relationship. And because of this, I felt that Ezra would have been a better option because of the way she develops and how Wain's view of her slightly changes as the novel progresses. I think if the author had developed Eva more and given her more time in her interactions with Wain, then their coming together would have been much more satisfying. This is not to say that I don't like Eva, because as I read more of the novel I accepted her as she matches our protagonist's personality quite well and her interactions with our mc are quite a nice way to step back from the action. That's all, keep up the good work Arlemit.

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Arlemit
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Thanks for the honest review

Carlos_2757
Carlos_2757Lv3

Hola, entonces tiene alguna relación con erza o solo se queda con Eva?

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Okay review time 560 chapters, i criticized this novel hard at first and Absolutely thought it was trash tier. writing quality was Horrible and alot of things just didnt add up. also if he needed it then he magically stumbles across it by the end of the chapter. Alot of useless chapters about rnadom characters or several drawn out info dumps because the chapters are so small you may end up with 5 straight chapters that you can pretty much skip if you wanted. Now this is where things change. every 10 chapters you can see obvious improvement so i continued to read. i enjoyed seeing the author gradually fix the mistakes and planning ahead. now mc mindset doesnt alter too much but it does change a little from influence around him but its not a 180 hero of justice all of a sudden, dude is still ruthless. i have to say the romance is absolutely sudden and didnt care for it at all with the main chick E** and just find it god awful honestly was hoping she would die off but E*** on the otherhand was way more drawn out and makes more sense throughout the story and seems like the right way to go kinda like he learned what it should be but couldnt fix it so tried again (atleast my opinion of course). there stays grammar mistakes but just a bunch of tiny things and very well eligible. the power concept is interesting and well done but here is my issue its not his original power, he doesnt forge a path with a unique soul even tho it is “unique” because turns out the strongest in the world had it first and he is just an heir to it. it gets old with the whole “im an heir to the strongest or i turn out to be the reincarnation of the strongest and i unlock my memories and blah blah blah.” After binging it in 3 days, I believe it has ALOT of potential in the later chapters and definitely has a good mystery to it and leaves you wanting the big answers and worth reading if you can struggle past the beginning, 7/10.

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