The personality of the mc is too bland for me, Author says that his personality will change and its for future character development but I am doubtfull of that, after all finding good character development on this site is almost immposible.The book is written well but like I said the mc is really unappealing to me, I don't want an mc who is a ruthless or anything like that, just an mc who is sure of himself and knows what to do and most importantly can stand for himself not some doormate that anyone can step on and this isn't a critic against this fi but recently I have seen a lot of fanfic gong for the 'realistic' approach in the world of fiction which personally I feel is dumb, realistic dosen't equate to interesting or fun to read,any way I will change the review if I feel that there is some change in the MC.
Alekzi
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LIKEHere's the problem , most of the fanfic gets dropped or worse the character development never happens so I think most of the people never wait and just go of their first impression,thats why I said I will change the review if I see said character development happen. Don't let this demotivate you, the ff is well written just the mc is too bland which as you said can be fixed.
Alekzi:It will change, in more ways than one. It just annoys me that no one can wait. 12 chapters only uploaded, that is like nothing, the MC personality would change before 20 chapter, but it seems no one can wait.
leo26:Here's the problem , most of the fanfic gets dropped or worse the character development never happens so I think most of the people never wait and just go of their first impression,thats why I said I will change the review if I see said character development happen. Don't let this demotivate you, the ff is well written just the mc is too bland which as you said can be fixed.