The story is great, it is well written, it has a good rhythm, logic and good construction of characters at the moment, I also liked the fruits (I vote for the water loggia or the water dragon), although I hope that the Mc does not begin to behave as a fanboy who just wants to help out and keep up with the main characters for no reason, it would be annoying, I'd like to see what changes and how far the Mc will be able to go (sorry if the comment is a little off track as so far no has reached that point, I only mention it because there are many ff where the Mc becomes the nanny of the protagonists and they ruin the story, and so far it is very good although it is just my personal opinion and I. I guess everyone has his point of view), anyway so far it's a good ff, I recommend it :)
Alekzi
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