excellent chapter, I like how the story progresses, I like that Asafa behaves more like a real lion, but without forgetting that the story is based on a children's program so it will not be completely realistic (Google translate)

and regarding the poll, I vote for number 4 (Google translator)

Some recommendations I could give:

Thanks for the chapter 👍, although it would be good if the story progresses, the fic is getting boring just seeing his life in the academy (Google translator).

I think it is too hasty to judge the fic with only 1 or 2 chapters, not to mention that an exaggerated healing is not something unheard of in naruto?, considering that there are jashin members like Hidan who are practically immortal, in addition to a great healing factor although incredibly useful doesn't cancel out the difference in strength, there are also several ways to defeat him like capturing him, or sealing him (the best example is Edo Tensei, as there were multiple very powerful shinobi who were practically indestructible, inexhaustible chakra, etc, and yet were sealed) [Google translator]

thanks for the chapter 👍

I think it's a bit rushed to leave it at the first chapter, moreover, although the negative features are annoying, there are still the positive ones that can balance it out, anyway, it's ok to read a few more chapters to see how it turns out. (Google translator)

hahaha good start 😂, but I hope the negative traits are not so severe or that he can control them to some extent, otherwise it would be quite boring to see the guy getting hit all the time 😑. (Google translator)

thanks for the chapter 😁👍

Thanks for the chapter 😁

I understand, thanks for answering 👍

Thanks for the chapter 👍 Any reference to what Mc's appearance is?

This is not a review of the story itself, but to thank the author for writing a Peaky Blinders ff, I was looking for ff of this topic for a long time and couldn't find any, so thanks, I'll write another review. later after reading the chapters. (Google translator)

I agree that it would be good to start another ff and leave this one, although I prefer with another topic. 👍

Author, is there any reference to what the Mc looks like? Also thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one :)

I hope your treasure will be stolen, after all you will need money when you start going on your own and to fund future projects not to mention the other valuable items and if it is the kaido fruit I hope you will get it. after all. . Even without the fruit, Kaido will probably rise to the top with the potential he has, he might even get another fruit, it's an amazing fruit anyway and it would be foolish not to take it, it could be for him or some member of the crew. (I'd rather he eat himself), and at the end of everything after the war they will part ways and he will no longer be an ally of Kaido, he might even be an enemy, anyway, he may be speculating a lot, hope to see the following 😁👍

Yes, I also hope Thena x Mc 😁👍

excellent, the idea is very good, the eternals are shown in more depth, I also disappoint the film, it is well written, the rhythm and development of the story is good, the characters seem real, the interactions are good, the length of the chapters well, overall an excellent story, I really hope the author can continue with this great story (also if possible I would like Mc to enter into a sentimental relationship, although something real), anyway excellent, I hope to see how he progresses :)