Review Detail of lstreader in Cheatless reincarnation in the world of Dxd

Item: Cheatless reincarnation in the world of Dxd
Rating: 1.8

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lstreaderLv142yrlstreader

Not that good. I read a little but it has some big plot holes and just overall ridiculous things like how he said he lived in Tokyo yet walked to a forest and found a waterfall nearby, and this was all when he was six, where were his parents and how was there a waterfall near Tokyo. He also immediately was able to sense natural energy when he mentioned he had no cheats

Cheatless reincarnation in the world of Dxd

hendra_gunawan_8460

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hendra_gunawan_8460Authorhendra_gunawan_8460

You have to separate about the story from the real life sir, this is a fanfic, so it's only natural that I made something like that in it anyway

2yr

Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1Zenos_Maxima2611

well, even for fanfiction itself it must be according to the geography where mc you live.

hendra_gunawan_8460:You have to separate about the story from the real life sir, this is a fanfic, so it's only natural that I made something like that in it anyway

2yr

Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1Zenos_Maxima2611

maybe it's a sewer line LOL, because Tokyo is a Megapolitan.

2yr

Zzz_808Lv3Zzz_808

Yehahahahahha

Zenos_Maxima2611:maybe it's a sewer line LOL, because Tokyo is a Megapolitan.
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2yr

C_ChanLv13C_Chan

Even as story, it was using real world as the setting, so you still have to use geographic location and common sense.

hendra_gunawan_8460:You have to separate about the story from the real life sir, this is a fanfic, so it's only natural that I made something like that in it anyway

1yr