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CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv53yr
2021-11-30 06:52

To be honest there really isn’t anything good about this in fact if I could give it no stars I would I don’t mean to be insulting but this is just trash ( Just my personal opinion)

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Vitamorte
VitamorteLv6

Why is it just trash.? Give me some examples. I've not read it yet so I'm relying on you

CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

Grammar, word choice, the speed at which The novel operates is just odd, and the way everything is written is confusing. There was more pertaining to the story and character development but I really don’t feel like wasting any more time on this. I hope this helped 🙂

Vitamorte:Why is it just trash.? Give me some examples. I've not read it yet so I'm relying on you
Tog_Python
Tog_PythonLv4

Its good in my opinion but the grammar cOuld use help and were is the romance i how he endS up with AToria Pendragon

CloudSmoke:Grammar, word choice, the speed at which The novel operates is just odd, and the way everything is written is confusing. There was more pertaining to the story and character development but I really don’t feel like wasting any more time on this. I hope this helped 🙂
CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

🤷‍♂️

Tog_Python:Its good in my opinion but the grammar cOuld use help and were is the romance i how he endS up with AToria Pendragon
Tog_Python
Tog_PythonLv4

And Jenne

Tog_Python:Its good in my opinion but the grammar cOuld use help and were is the romance i how he endS up with AToria Pendragon
Hultra
HultraLv14

Saved my time from reading this one chief.

CloudSmoke:Grammar, word choice, the speed at which The novel operates is just odd, and the way everything is written is confusing. There was more pertaining to the story and character development but I really don’t feel like wasting any more time on this. I hope this helped 🙂
CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

Hultra:Saved my time from reading this one chief.
dying_immortal
dying_immortalLv2

hey was mc OP??

Shujinko_Josei
Shujinko_JoseiLv12

This is just translation fanfiction which is very obvious. Recently there a lot of Translated Works rather than Original Works on the fanfic side.

M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13

Are they love interests?

Tog_Python:And Jenne
Lightening_king
Lightening_kingLv1

they are but the MC just left them in their world and seriously why I hate it is that he has an item that could help me bring his love interest with him but chooses to let them stay in their world . .. .. to me that is a definition of a scum

M7TH1C:Are they love interests?
M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13

I gotta ask because fate Is the type of anime that has a LOT and I mean ALOT of ntr h*ntai, I don't know about fanfics but If Attack on Titan Is anything to go by then I'm guessing It does.

Lightening_king:they are but the MC just left them in their world and seriously why I hate it is that he has an item that could help me bring his love interest with him but chooses to let them stay in their world . .. .. to me that is a definition of a scum
Lightening_king
Lightening_kingLv1

If u love it u can go

M7TH1C:I gotta ask because fate Is the type of anime that has a LOT and I mean ALOT of ntr h*ntai, I don't know about fanfics but If Attack on Titan Is anything to go by then I'm guessing It does.
M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13

when did I say I like it?, I DESPISE NTR

Lightening_king:If u love it u can go
Lightening_king
Lightening_kingLv1

I don't see NTR . .. . all I saw was a careless dragon drifting in space with his mindless love sense and the boring adventure in the same world

M7TH1C:when did I say I like it?, I DESPISE NTR
jinmorifan_2
jinmorifan_2Lv4

If I had to explain, the dumb dragon doesn't get Scathach (his pseudo mother/caretaker) because he only feels familial love but takes the worst waifus. Like Medb is his most beloved wife for some reason even though he has Lion King Artoria, Gilgamesh (female), Guinevere (who did not or did cheat, probably did cheat), etc.

M7TH1C:when did I say I like it?, I DESPISE NTR
Astoria_Pendragon
Astoria_PendragonLv4

i agree with you bro he was dumb, not taking scathach as a wife.

jinmorifan_2:If I had to explain, the dumb dragon doesn't get Scathach (his pseudo mother/caretaker) because he only feels familial love but takes the worst waifus. Like Medb is his most beloved wife for some reason even though he has Lion King Artoria, Gilgamesh (female), Guinevere (who did not or did cheat, probably did cheat), etc.
jinmorifan_2
jinmorifan_2Lv4

because chinese authors have the weird waifu choices. they must prioritise either be loli or nice thighs

Astoria_Pendragon:i agree with you bro he was dumb, not taking scathach as a wife.
God_of_Nothingness
God_of_NothingnessLv13

no, at both the times, he didn't have the ability to take them away. In case of Artoria, because of Le fay, he was abruptly sent off, and during life with jeane, he was in his avatar form and not his real form, so it wasn't possible.

Lightening_king:they are but the MC just left them in their world and seriously why I hate it is that he has an item that could help me bring his love interest with him but chooses to let them stay in their world . .. .. to me that is a definition of a scum
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