The authors' choice of transmigration and immaturity doesn't go along well together. A grown man acting all childish doesn't go along that's all.Also the development, till 16 chapters not even a day has passed. Thousands of words and yet only some progress. Loads of fillers in it, that doesn't contribute anything to the plot.I hope the author edits and paces their work properly in the future.
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