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Review Detail of HonoHideki in The Forsaken Era

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HonoHideki
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This a review written after reading the first chapter: So the writing quality at the moment isn't that bad, I have seen worse but I've also seen better. But it's better than those MTL novels so yeah 4 stars, but I'll just put it as 5 cause it looks nicer. The stability is very stable with one chapter already being uploaded within ermm... 3 hours, making the average update time at the moment (subject to change) 1 chapter per 3 hour, so 5 stars. The story has developed much faster compared to most novels in their prologues and first chapters, with major change having already occurred for whom I believe is the main character, so five stars again. I also know more about the entire main character's live than I do about Han Sen after reading 2000+ chapters of Super Gene since he's still alive and the same can't really be said about the main character of this novel, so 5 stars again. And the world background is again, much better than most novels, with myself knowing much more about the world just from reading the synopsis than I do for most novels just starting off or in their early chapters, so 5 stars for world background. Good luck for the rest of your novel!

The Forsaken Era

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Rezonan
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thanks since the pacing is a little too fast I'll try and slow it down a bit and I just got someone to have me edit the chapters so the Grammer and paragraphs will look a lot better now thanks for the review