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2022-01-20 21:49

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Zenon00125
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I think this image matches the description of the mc a lot

Theoretical
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Warning ⚠️ Mc is a trash Beta simp Male the moment he sees Girls from One Piece (so far only Nico Robin

Zenon00125
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I disagree so far he only reacts with the fan nothing too exaggerated and from what I see he is in control

Theoretical:Warning ⚠️ Mc is a trash Beta simp Male the moment he sees Girls from One Piece (so far only Nico Robin
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Espada_Jin
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-Writing Quality: For me it is good and understandable, simple and has few errors, I'll give it 5/5 -Updating Stability: 13 chapters in three days since the fanfic was released so far is a very good thing deserves appreciation, I'll give it 5/5 -Story Development: Establishing a clear and explicit scenario for the story from the beginning sings the author and readers of the problems of progress and continuity of the story, because this story has really huge potential, I just hope that the author keeps up with the good work, the story has two main worlds in the beginning with the possibility of adding other worlds, MC is considered a host for a very powerful spatial system that can pick up the coordinates of the worlds and open a portal to move to them, this is a good and logical idea, it is clear that the system was designed to make its employer a global conqueror. Getting started in the world of One Piece is a great start, I look forward to seeing the world of the original protagonist that the author said was the OC. I'll give it 5/5 -Character Design: So far we have seen few characters beside the protagonist, the character design of the hero is good, he was reincarnated from the earth and lived for 17 years in a medieval world without any cheat but he was all lucky to be a crown prince in an empire, looks full of struggle and secret fighting between princes, the story is very good, as the protagoniste is very clever, as we saw how the author explained that the hero has already merged with the ideas of his new world. And we saw in the first chapter how cruel he is to test his food on a person before he eats it, and this is necessary to show his cruelty to others so that they do not overthrow him. Everything the protagonist is experiencing in his new world is very abnormal and I look forward to seeing more of him. I'll give it 5/5 -World background: Dolla's world, is the OC written by the writer, so far we've seen the diamond city where the hero lives, and the world of One Piece we've seen monsters island in the western blue, the organization is good so far and the background is great. I'll give it 5/5

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