Overall: good, could be better, but i had to stop reading this because the writing style kinda annoyed me. I don't want to get headache. Writing quality - 1* (because i put high importance in this. so, stricter than other criteria) Longwinded. Bad reading flow. Sometimes there's missing word and used bad choice of words making it awkward and harder to read. Other than that, it's good Mc is not braindead, that's a plus. Most new novels nowadays have below average iq mc resulting in many plotholes or forced plot. Well, if you have passion in writing and want to improve yourself better. you should read your old chapters and fix what needed to be fixed. This includes your other novels too.
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Warning ⚠️ Mc is a trash Beta simp Male the moment he sees Girls from One Piece (so far only Nico Robin
I disagree so far he only reacts with the fan nothing too exaggerated and from what I see he is in control
