What ive read so far i really like and im sure Its gonna vet even better and I should know that cuz im the beta for the story and already have read more chapters And its very good imo [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

when it got to THAT scene between Vivian and her half brother, I felt so sick that I ended up briefly skimming the first volume. Objectively I think what you wrote was great for the story, but I couldn't read it. Sorry about that. I know you put a lot of effort into the first volume, and I didn't read it. after volume 2 started, I finally slowed down, and I'm really enjoying it.

From what I've read, the world building is pretty consistent. The detailed description of the characters makes it pretty easy to visualise what's going on in that fictional world. In some sense, it feels like this is more of a journal at times, which is not bad by any means, and only adds more to look forward to the different styles one can view this as. Can't wait to read more of it.

Oh my... This was purely amazing. I was usually a fast reader, but by reading this piece of work, I couldn't help but tried to read it slowly and savor the contents. Do you like how things were described in detail, touching every part of your personal thought? If you do, then this is going to be one of the few best first-person view stories you'll ever read. Even I, as a writer, would say I am lacking in many parts, especially in the detail. My favorite part is around chapters 30 to 40s, where MC is taking time hunting, selling them, and coming through the life of reality. It was harsh, yet enjoyable, mean, but logical, and not to forget a detail, but not overly explained. My praise is unworthy, but yours would do if you just went through the story and get immersed into what the world the author brought to us. Go ahead and try. I don't regret reading it, and you too.

First of all the story is good, quite interesting, the writing quality needs to be worked on I would give it a 4/5 but with a little tweaking it will be even better, I like the way the author described the characters, pretty easy for any reader to understand or even visualize, overall good job.

Throw the first chapter the story gets better and better. It haves slow chapters and chapters you don't want to end too.