but you don't answer my whispers, mia Alexy [img=faceslap]

Mia dear Alexa, you little devil :D

:)) yeah but we will handle it, brother

thank you so much, dear Tatenda. I am trying to focus on the main story all the time and force to improve it.

thank you so much, dear friend.

thank you so much, dear friend. Yes, the story is a little unusual. It was a fiction I had modeled in my mind for three years.

yes unfortunately I have to use gore because of the way the story works but I try to keep it as limited as possible.

yes unfortunately I have to use gore because of the way the story works but I try to keep it as limited as possible. Thank you so much, mia friend.

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thank you so much, Mel_Aniv. I am really happy about your reaction and comment.

After examining grammar on both the program and on different sites, I take care to publish it. thank you very much, friend.

yes, I worked very detailedly on the setup, but this may be considered unnecessary by the readers. so your comment made me happy.

A successful introduction to the story has been made, I experienced emotional change while reading. In the following chapters, I became much more attached to the story. A really good novel, I would like to thank the author.

and their conversation was funny

the names of the people in the rescue squad are interesting.

rescue squad iz here, glad.

a good start. I like it. Let me drop a note. unfortunately, WN readers don't like long paragraphs, so I recommend making the paragraphs as short as possible. but I repeat, I liked it.

I want to be very clear. I've been here for a long time and have read hundreds of novels. But I have never read a novel with battle scenes illustrated in such an epic and fluent style like this! I would like to especially congratulate the author of this book. Your novel took its place at the top of my collection...

what an entrance to the story. Amazing!

wow, MC is something different.