Item: Rinnegan in Boruto
Rating: 2.6
Author: Alice1412

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2021-11-24 11:20

It’s not just bad grammar but horrible spelling that makes it seem like you’re losing your brain cells reading it. I understand English is not their first language but yhey can at least put in the effort to search up the correct spelling or invest in a dictionary.

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