Alice1412

A simple MTL that isn’t unique and has multiple grammar and spelling mistakes. It’s clear that the author hasn’t fixed the mistakes and just copied and pasted without checking.

There is a repeated paragraph here

Absolutely terrible. Machine translated and didn’t bother to edit the work. So many misspelled words that it makes it difficult to understand.

This chapter is a copy from a different fanfic. I remember reading this in a different fanfic.

It’s not just bad grammar but horrible spelling that makes it seem like you’re losing your brain cells reading it. I understand English is not their first language but yhey can at least put in the effort to search up the correct spelling or invest in a dictionary.

This is a really great story so far and it has a lot of potential. Its also interesting to put a character similar to gojo with vampire traits, but should probably put a warning that Harry is a girl in case people were not expecting that