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Deametryvan_Bush_5688
Deametryvan_Bush_5688Lv23yr
2021-12-11 03:14

It was really interesting for me but the mc is too dumb and reliant. Just one of the proof is the couple times the system tries to unbind with the mc, like you don't curse at a system like ever! Just shows how low and infuriating she is. Flaunty, dumb, reliant, etc. Mc is disappointing also the system a bit. I would like a system like that and I would never curse at it. So ungrateful. O and the guy is useless. But I'mma still read it don't worry my minds got filter.

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