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loriperfect
loriperfectLv133yr
2021-12-11 01:14

Ok when I read the sipnosis, I was happy because I have been wanted something different for so long. After reading 20 chapters , this is my conclusion 1- the MC IQ is 0 2- the ML iQ lower the more time he expend with the mc 3- the entire story is stupid and the mc is so stupid that make me judge the writer thoughts. Does He/she has something agains women? 4- did someone took one of those stupid novels with no brain male mc and just change the gender of the mc. DISAPPOINTED 😔

Bookstore System: A Surprise Every Day

Wuxia
3.9
40 Chs

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Kerail
KerailLv12

Wait as of late the tranlated names and stuff has been changed so you could not find original. Is it possible that they even changed mc and ml/fl gender o.O ?

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this is the most interesting synopsis iI'veread in the pilot read. please pick this one 🙏 [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

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huomian1235
huomian1235Lv2

Please someone tell me it's Raw title! .....................................................................................................

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Wallflower_Monk
Wallflower_MonkLv10

I read 10 chapters before I dropped this novel 😓. While the synopsis is interesting, the novel is not done so well. Detailed review below: • The FL randomly receives a system with an awesome power. It's really cool. Anything she reads can become a reality. So for example if she reads an article about an expensive car, she'll immediately feel car keys in her pocket and the system will tell her the car is ready to be driven in her parking space. This is limited to one item a day, but I mean, how awesome is that?! 🤩... It's too bad the system's personality is WHINEY 😑. I don't like this system. It keeps on threatening to unbind with her if she says anything bad. It's like a nagging child. Sort of takes away the awesomeness of the system. It also has no backstory. Like why did it appear? Why did it choose her? There are just not enough details given about this system. 👩🏻 The FEMALE LEAD: > She kinda sucks to be honest🤷🏽‍♀️. She's definitely not very intelligent. Or very likeable: > FL's dad is diagnosed with cancer but has no money for treatment. FL gets enough money from the system and sends it to her father. Now a normal person would go live close to their dad in this period of time ESPECIALLY SINCE she is now a millionnaire who doesn't work anymore so has a lot of free time; AND she has a system so she can get anything she wants. You know what this FL does? She decides to spend her free time going on double dates with her ex-boyfriend and his new sugar momma 🤯😖. I DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND! You legit got an awesome system and are wasting your time with your ex 🤦🏽‍♀️. Her dad possibly dying is thrown into the part of her brain that doesn't work so well. From her actions so far that's a pretty big part 😒. > Honestly, the system is wasted on her. Instead of googling awesome stuff to have she resorts to magazines- not always getting what she specifically wants. 📚 I just do not like it. It's translated well enough but that's about the only good thing. A pity really. Such a great idea but not implemented well. Needs way more detail and backstory.

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lalalalalame
lalalalalameLv10

This Seems so interesting, I wonder who the celebrity is!!!!! I can’t wait for it To get picked!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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trick_or_treat
trick_or_treatLv6

Uh... is it just me or does it sound like a different novel where the mc transmigrated to a new body, who was a mom and had to raise her poor kids but with the help of the system and lots of reading she resolves their poverty slowly? Not sure if the novel I mentioned was tled but I do remeber that it was shown her not long ago 🤔🤔 Raw? Spoilers?

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DarkSorceress
DarkSorceressLv12

Finally, a female-mc book which does not have the ml's possessiveness and name on the synopsis [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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hanami27
hanami27Lv12

Reveal spoiler

3yr
X_X_I
X_X_ILv4

This review is based on 40 chapters & only has a high rating because of the translation quality. The synopsis catches ones attention but the way the story is executed is greatly lacking. While it's kind of fun to see which new skills/items FL will acquire to help herself, the story has no flow being all over the place. There's a couple of times where the skills she acquires aren't what she wanted & cause her trouble, like the flirting skills which was so random & forced her into a weird situation. Also, we don't know exactly how/why FL received the system & readers are left wondering. As for FL herself, she's naïve & not in a cute/good way - she continues to put herself in trouble. It's not a story I would recommend.

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huomian1235
huomian1235Lv2

oh god someone pls tell it's Raw title it seems so interesting that I can't wait to read more!!! .... ............ ...... . .

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