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TheTrickster12
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2022-04-11 01:24

I loved the story I fist found it whilst browsing the new story novels and I think there were about 50-70 chaps in at the time and I was hooked It was really interesting and fun to read

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HaracasAye
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Never trust a novel that purports to have an evil mc if it has alot of good reviews. Writing quality is good minus the few typos in every chapter and updates are consistent. The world setting is the usual high fantasy genre with elves, dwarves beastmen etc. The limbo has potential but it has yet to be explored. The plot is good and somewhat engaging but the issue I cannot overlook is the fact that the mc is supposedly neutral evil. When you look at all the events that occur through that lense it doesnt really satisfy my desire as an evil mc fan and it feels like the novel is ripping me off. Also the sheer existence of rules is antithetical to the concept of neutral evil morality and should automatically disqualify the mc as some of them are in direct conflict with the alignment. Tldr it feels like im reading one of those cheap mangas, where everything the mc does is justified, and on the morally right side even tho we are told he doesnt care. Everything that the mc does for the most part is reactionary, hes not actively seeking out solutions. He wants information, a group of adventures make trouble for him and try to kill him, so he slaughters them all and gets what he wants from the last one alive before killing them. Why does he agree to join the academy? Because some mage tells him its the only way to cure his mana overload problem. The idea that its a good place to grow stronger is only a passing thought to him. Nobles come after him because of his ranking, so now he has a reason to strip them of their resources so he can get a head start when arriving at the academy. There are also odd situations that arise here and there which I can only describe as poison. Remember those adventurers he killed. A boy who is also an adventurer attacks him but all he gets is a minor injury unlike everyone else who died. The reason? Mc thought he wasnt worth killing as he got what he needed. But what about previously when u were fighting them for the sake of fighting and did not have a thought to get information? A pregnant couple ask mc for a spot in line ahed of him cause the women has been in the sun all day. Lo and behold the guy behind mc insults him, to which mc breaks his jaw and tells him to leave, offering the couple the spot. Why? What benefit does that bring mc? A young girl escorts the mc around town and asks for 1 bronze coin, he giver her 2 silvers. Again why? And these were all situations in just the first 14 chapters. Im dissapointed cause the author can write but as far as I read which is 14 chapters skimming to 50 its false advertising. Shuda just made the mc antihero and there would have been no problem.

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