TheTrickster12

This is just a very sudden change, Its too sudden. i’m not sure I like this

Hah, well back to waiting days for an update ig

Thanks for the chap

World building is great, writing quality is good with a few errors in between chaps but still very acceptable. Well what I can say is the mc is all too human and not like some other fanfics where he becomes strong way too fast, I really like the change of pace here. It feels realistic and just right as this world’s harry potter relies on cunningness and hardwork to get shit done.

Shame I only discovered this novel recently

*rather unusual

That’s one way to make me lose interest. There’s a “villain” tag for a reason, and if you weren’t going to place the mc in slytherin then just remove it.

No

Do you think wizards have unlimited mana? Unlike guns, wizards have limited reserves. We’re not even talking about gases, bombs and nukes here.