Review Detail of ZennyWry in Mushoku Tensei: Angy

Item: Mushoku Tensei: Angy
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

ZennyWryAuthor2yrZennyWry

Okay I'm writing a review for my own book, just stating what I think -Pacing bad -Interaction bad -Progression (Idk) -The idea of it I think is ok? Just not executed properly So I give myself 3.4 stars

Mushoku Tensei: Angy

ZennyWry

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the_vasto_of_whiteLv1the_vasto_of_white

Man you really had a solid basis for this story but it seems to me like you didn’t want to dip your feet into anything deep in fear of mistakes. You really had a solid basis for you story but just didn’t wanna go the mileage it seems.

2yr