Review Detail of EternalEden in Avatar: Awakened Gamer

A truly interesting and well-made story. A lot of attention was put into it, and it doesn't just follow the events of the show. The author isn't afraid to make their own events and does a great job with that. I definitely recommend this as a read. If I had some complaints it's that as the story goes on, the "darker" aspects of the story seem to become more and more forced. And doesn't feel as natural as it did before. It feels forced and a little cringy as the MC continually "wallows in his darkness". The idea of it is alright, but the execution is shaky. Later on, the author also struggles with the gamer system and keeping it balanced within the story. Because the system is so strong, the author has to go out of their way to nerf it...a LOT. All the points are put into luck because if they weren't, the MC would honestly just steamroll everything with no problems. The author tries to justify this by getting more spirits involved in the story and saying the luck is necessary and that only luck could solve it, but that is flimsy at best. Even after all this, the MC has like 30 different lucky draws he never uses, and the author had to come up with a pretty lackluster reason for him to stop leveling up so he doesn't just break the narrative.