Everything is good until now. Writing quality is good. Almost none grammatical mistakes... Story development is good but hope he just doesn't share his power to his family because they literally threw him away. If that happens and he shares his power to his family saying that his father didn't knew about it or it was his stepmothers fault but she's family, I will literally drop this novel. Hope he doesn't go such way. Character designs is good, but we don't know much about MC's personality and traits but this is just start so nothing can be said about it. But I personally believe that mc is smart but naive... Updating stability good... World background is also good. There are thousands of possibilities for future development of Mc and his sect. =========================== BTW, I have some great ideas for this novel. How about adding many chilché like: a player being reborn, a player which was born in present world of MC but got reincarnated in the new world(from where the players comes), player who can see future, players with their own system, players who have artifacts with great abilities. And our MC can get these power, abilities or artifacts by killing them in game (also dead in real life due to several reasons like electrical cutoff, building collapse or heart attacks...

An interesting novel with a very rare story about a sect of players but with magic. There are no complaints about the 4 chapters. Characters react and act realistically with a touch of humor. I have read only one similar novel but there is about cultivators and it is abandoned. I hope for frequent updates and a large number of chapters. And advice to the author if you get tired of writing or run out of ideas to make the last chapter with a skip of time, so what happened and the end of the story (I saw this only in 2-3 stories, which is a pity).

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Too lazy rn to write a structured review. ..................................................................................................

Sometimes it's stupidly unreasonable and unrealistic. tjtjnsitnitsmi6s6mi6imm6iw6iwmi6mwmu5qmu5qmu5q5umqmu55mumu5q5muqm5 140 words complete

great concept, plot, background, keep up the work. I beg you to never add a love interest to the mc, to one of the players is fine however,.

No update ,?? . It's a good story .. Hope u don't drop it .. Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej

4.8 The concept is good (It's not that new but this concept is very rare to see.) The story development is decent. Nothing special is happening yet cause it's still new. For the World Background and Character Design, I think it's still too early to judge on that but I'm hoping to see something new but interesting. Writing Quality, I have a feeling that the author are probably using grammarly which is good. However, sometimes I feel like it's kinda hard to read(?). I think searching for the right synonyms, simplifying the sentence construction, and lessening the use of "," could help. (It might help with the word count too.)

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