An interesting novel with a very rare story about a sect of players but with magic. There are no complaints about the 4 chapters. Characters react and act realistically with a touch of humor. I have read only one similar novel but there is about cultivators and it is abandoned. I hope for frequent updates and a large number of chapters. And advice to the author if you get tired of writing or run out of ideas to make the last chapter with a skip of time, so what happened and the end of the story (I saw this only in 2-3 stories, which is a pity).

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Too lazy rn to write a structured review. ..................................................................................................

Sometimes it's stupidly unreasonable and unrealistic. tjtjnsitnitsmi6s6mi6imm6iw6iwmi6mwmu5qmu5qmu5q5umqmu55mumu5q5muqm5 140 words complete

great concept, plot, background, keep up the work. I beg you to never add a love interest to the mc, to one of the players is fine however,.

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4.8 The concept is good (It's not that new but this concept is very rare to see.) The story development is decent. Nothing special is happening yet cause it's still new. For the World Background and Character Design, I think it's still too early to judge on that but I'm hoping to see something new but interesting. Writing Quality, I have a feeling that the author are probably using grammarly which is good. However, sometimes I feel like it's kinda hard to read(?). I think searching for the right synonyms, simplifying the sentence construction, and lessening the use of "," could help. (It might help with the word count too.)

I expect a lot from this novel, and I hope that the author would be willing to listen to his most loyal reader's suggestions. I still have not read the novel yet, but I would soon though I already read a lot of the author's other works, and I can say with the most definite answer that they are good at writing, so I would like to give the benefits of the doubt and rate it five stars.

Класная книга , хорошое начало , интересный сюжет , жду продолжения!!♡☆♡☆♡☆♡☆♡☆♡☆♡☆♤♧◇◇■□●○♤♧◇■□□○※¤※※♡☆♡☆♡☆☆☆•○●□■◇♧♤◇◇□□○•○□■■♤□□○○□■■♧♤■○•○□■♤♤♤■●•●□■♤♤■◇□○••\■♤♤|