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Bro he is too weak to be a god I thought he was holding back but suddenly he says he got stronger but he is fighting Minotaur's like bruh I though you could fight gods but you are struggling on floor 15 when adventurers are on like level 50 of the dungeon how is he going to fight gods?!
War, Trickery, and Wisdom
Austin_Harrison
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You may the first author on here that actually can take critisism and improve upon it. You have my respect
Austin_Harrison:I completely understand where your coming from bro, and I agree with you for the most part. You may have misinterpreted slightly and I also may have not written what I meant. I wrote the part that your talking about with the thought that Kratos is not holding back, but scaling his own power as to leave opportunities for Atreus to gain combat experience. It’s not exactly an excuse, but I am pretty much a beginner writer. I will make mistakes, and it seems you’ve found one of them. I’m not sure if you agree, but at least to me, if I were to write Kratos at full power at all times, then there would literally be no point in even writing this. Kratos would kill everything with one hit and it would be a pretty boring fan fic. If you have played the newest god of war, then do you remember when Modi attacked Kratos in Tyrs temple? If you do, then let me tell you something; if the writers of that game were to write Kratos at his actual strength, then modi would have his head removed before even touching Kratos or Atreus. Thanks for the review though man, and I appreciate that you actually pointed out a problem instead of saying, “Kratos weak, fan fic bad.”
Bruh your completely ignoring the fact that he has a son to train. And I’d like to know where he truly struggled, because I wrote the thing and I don’t remember that. Have you played the newest god of war at all? Because if you did, then you would know that if what your saying were to happen, then there wouldn’t be much of a game.
It says he got stronger my point is if he got stronger on that floor and it showed then he wasn't holding back and if that is all he can do while not holding back then that means he is not that much stronger(I know he is not using divinity I am talking about how his body is supposed to be the strongest of the gods. 1.He almost got sneak attacked 2.He is using the weapons that are supposed to be able to kill gods and break space but he is using them in a way that it seams like it is their limit it may just be a misinterpretation on my part but it just seams like he is not holding back but in fact is using all his physical power and not cutting the dungeon floors in two with a swing like you would think a legendary weapon would.
Austin_Harrison:Bruh your completely ignoring the fact that he has a son to train. And I’d like to know where he truly struggled, because I wrote the thing and I don’t remember that. Have you played the newest god of war at all? Because if you did, then you would know that if what your saying were to happen, then there wouldn’t be much of a game.
And what about his son he is supposed to be powerful as well is he also holding back?(he wants to buy a new bow my god his is a divine artifact from his mother even if it wasn't it is still from his mother even if he can transfer the power)
Austin_Harrison:Bruh your completely ignoring the fact that he has a son to train. And I’d like to know where he truly struggled, because I wrote the thing and I don’t remember that. Have you played the newest god of war at all? Because if you did, then you would know that if what your saying were to happen, then there wouldn’t be much of a game.
I completely understand where your coming from bro, and I agree with you for the most part. You may have misinterpreted slightly and I also may have not written what I meant. I wrote the part that your talking about with the thought that Kratos is not holding back, but scaling his own power as to leave opportunities for Atreus to gain combat experience. It’s not exactly an excuse, but I am pretty much a beginner writer. I will make mistakes, and it seems you’ve found one of them. I’m not sure if you agree, but at least to me, if I were to write Kratos at full power at all times, then there would literally be no point in even writing this. Kratos would kill everything with one hit and it would be a pretty boring fan fic. If you have played the newest god of war, then do you remember when Modi attacked Kratos in Tyrs temple? If you do, then let me tell you something; if the writers of that game were to write Kratos at his actual strength, then modi would have his head removed before even touching Kratos or Atreus. Thanks for the review though man, and I appreciate that you actually pointed out a problem instead of saying, “Kratos weak, fan fic bad.”
I_cant_choose_name:It says he got stronger my point is if he got stronger on that floor and it showed then he wasn't holding back and if that is all he can do while not holding back then that means he is not that much stronger(I know he is not using divinity I am talking about how his body is supposed to be the strongest of the gods. 1.He almost got sneak attacked 2.He is using the weapons that are supposed to be able to kill gods and break space but he is using them in a way that it seams like it is their limit it may just be a misinterpretation on my part but it just seams like he is not holding back but in fact is using all his physical power and not cutting the dungeon floors in two with a swing like you would think a legendary weapon would.
Austin_Harrison:I completely understand where your coming from bro, and I agree with you for the most part. You may have misinterpreted slightly and I also may have not written what I meant. I wrote the part that your talking about with the thought that Kratos is not holding back, but scaling his own power as to leave opportunities for Atreus to gain combat experience. It’s not exactly an excuse, but I am pretty much a beginner writer. I will make mistakes, and it seems you’ve found one of them. I’m not sure if you agree, but at least to me, if I were to write Kratos at full power at all times, then there would literally be no point in even writing this. Kratos would kill everything with one hit and it would be a pretty boring fan fic. If you have played the newest god of war, then do you remember when Modi attacked Kratos in Tyrs temple? If you do, then let me tell you something; if the writers of that game were to write Kratos at his actual strength, then modi would have his head removed before even touching Kratos or Atreus. Thanks for the review though man, and I appreciate that you actually pointed out a problem instead of saying, “Kratos weak, fan fic bad.”