I appreciate your comments man. I’ve waiting for someone to point out the mistakes that I’ve overlooked. Thank you for reading.

Preciate it man

Hola, Hombres. This is my first original novel, and I worked on it for about eight months before release. There will be mistakes, of that I'm sure. So if you'll be kind enough to point them out, then that would be pretty cash money. This novel is inspired by many other works, but the two biggest ones are "Reborn: Evolving From Nothing" by AuthorWiz, and "The Way Of Kings" by Brandon Sanderson. I'm sure most have at least heard of these books, but if not then I recommend them wholeheartedly. Both works are incredible, and I can only hope to reach a fraction of their greatness. Anyway, enjoy the novel!

Thousands of planets, a thousand years of history, religions, several characters being fleshed out at the same time. Yeah it’s big. Honestly I’m terrified that I’m gonna mess it up. But at the same time I love it too much to stop now. I apologize to you and everyone else that’s been waiting.

It’s easier to follow the ways of another than follow your own ways. If people like that didn’t exist, then there would only be CEOs. For leaders to exist, there have to be followers.

Of course. Days that I don't write are rare. It shouldn't be too long before I start posting again.

I’ve been writing man, constantly. My ambitions are proving to be bigger that I thought though. I’m writing an original novel, and it’ll be… massive. I want to be at the top.

Its his last name, so that means everyone in his family has his name. The Dillpickle Bloodline, unmatched by any other!

Oh, fancy seeing you here big guy.

Yes, it’s irritating to me also that I have to do this. The writers block was not a lie, and To be honest, I already want to continue this story with some ideas I’ve come up with since then. But then I got kicked in the nuts (fired from my job) and now, I gotta figure out how to take care of myself when the money I have saved up runs out. I don’t want money, I need money. Sounds pretty stupid, but I’m gonna need something to show for the hundreds maybe thousands of hours I’ve put into writing. Love you though man, and I understand how you feel. I plan to update this pretty soon though, so I hope you won’t give up on me yet.

It’ll only be the last one if you want it to be. I know some people won’t believe me until they see it, but I WILL NOT be dropping this fic.

I mean I said I wasn’t dropping it, but sure man. Have a good one.

Uhhh…. It’s actually really complicated. I don’t want to put the entire synopsis in this comment, so I’ll just say that it will have a lot of different anime and comic stuff in it.

I completely understand where your coming from bro, and I agree with you for the most part. You may have misinterpreted slightly and I also may have not written what I meant. I wrote the part that your talking about with the thought that Kratos is not holding back, but scaling his own power as to leave opportunities for Atreus to gain combat experience. It’s not exactly an excuse, but I am pretty much a beginner writer. I will make mistakes, and it seems you’ve found one of them. I’m not sure if you agree, but at least to me, if I were to write Kratos at full power at all times, then there would literally be no point in even writing this. Kratos would kill everything with one hit and it would be a pretty boring fan fic. If you have played the newest god of war, then do you remember when Modi attacked Kratos in Tyrs temple? If you do, then let me tell you something; if the writers of that game were to write Kratos at his actual strength, then modi would have his head removed before even touching Kratos or Atreus. Thanks for the review though man, and I appreciate that you actually pointed out a problem instead of saying, “Kratos weak, fan fic bad.”

Bruh your completely ignoring the fact that he has a son to train. And I’d like to know where he truly struggled, because I wrote the thing and I don’t remember that. Have you played the newest god of war at all? Because if you did, then you would know that if what your saying were to happen, then there wouldn’t be much of a game.

Context matters, and this is a conversation between two of the biggest schemers in mythology.

Oh yes sir, I am very aware. I already have some tattoos and they were hours of torture. I love it though.

Yo that’s actually a tattoo I’m getting on my thigh

So I actually have some insight when it comes to this topic. I work out myself and I’ve delved into bodybuilding and the community surrounding it. So the ‘pot belly’ look that most bodybuilders and powerlifters take on after a while is actually due to steroids. A gh (growth hormone) is a drug that many bodybuilders take, and as you can guess from the name, it increases growth in the body even after the alloted time for growth( most people stop growing around 18-25) but the thing with these drugs is that they also increase the size of your intestines and other organs, thus making them nearly too big to even fit in your own body and creating that bloated look. With all of that said though, I dont think Thor takes steroids lmao. It’s probably a mix of muscle and stupid amounts of mead.

My friend painted this and I wanted people to see it. This is the same guy who painted the familia symbol. I hope you like it!