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Item: then forgotten
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

AlexanderCaoLv12yrAlexanderCao

I think all the pieces are there. It has good character development and plot. i am basically personally looking for something new from the basic mana pool etc stuff, but its just my personal opinion. Only the writing is a bit hazy, but understandable if the author is not a native English speaker.

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GentleFlame27

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GentleFlame27AuthorGentleFlame27

I know my grammar is not good since I'm not an English native and I was always lazy not good at English essay writing haha but i will always try to perfect my English Anyway thanks for the honest review

2yr

AlexanderCaoLv1AlexanderCao

I mean I know the struggle having the story great in your head, but not being able to bring it to life on black paper. I am neither a strong writer

2yr