Thank you for the feedback. This is honestly what I wish I would get. Honest critisism, but without the useless banter. For what I am going for in this scene/battle, when Dalai emerges is to showcase, even though emperor Ala was said to have been close to godhood, he still is small fry compared to real one. A true showcase of how puny one is in the entire universe. I was aiming to showcase, though how powerful the strongest people were on Aesis, when the first actual god (the main beings techically in my story) appears, the realization how far must the MC journey out. Basically thinking one is close to the finnish line only to realize they havent even reached the first checkpoint. Sorry for the over explanation, but thank you so much for the feedback. Wish I get more of this. Keeps me motivated to write.

Thank you very much. I hope you keep finding my story entertaining :)

Thank you for reading :)

Thank you for the feedback :) I try my best, but it is nice to hear if someone likes my story :)

Erik was one of the original rebel nobles. He became the lord of Craiov. He also fought the raxnas with Pema and Amala.

Sorry, don't really get who lost to whom here xd Most likely I did some error somewhere. Can you spot it to me so I can fix it?

Wait until you read of the gods ;)

Luffy - Zorro, in a way, but it is clear who is the MC

Well I am not sure Rikard was stronger, but was just more martial in nature. I kinda don't put them into power rankings as MMA math doesn't really work (This guy wins this doesn't mean he automatically wins the other). Also I kinda view the relationship and power difference for Rufus and Edward the same way Zoro and Luffy from one piece.

Can you elaborate a bit more? :)

I'd describe them similar to Zoro and Luffy :)

Thank you for the positive review :)

Thank you for the comment :) I am a big fan of history and mythology, so I try to take a lot of inspiration from them (Guiscards being the normans for example). I know these info parts are FULL of grammar mistakes, simply reason to it is that I have been too lazy to go through it XD

Thank you for reading :) I was not in a rush, but I believe I suck when it comes to writing and describing battles (especially if it's not basic army movements but rather one on one fights)

Thank you for reading :D

Thank you for reading :)

Jesus christ, How did I not spot that xd thank you

Rufus took the fight into the imperial mainland. Sorry if I didn't write it and emphasize it clearly :/

Thank you for reading and putting your time to read :)

thank you for reading :)