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I read the first 3 chapters of it and while the story progressed at a good pace and the Logic behind it was okay, the writing itself wasn't that good. I had a hard time following sometimes and it was clear the authors first language isn't english. I recommend getting an Editor as it would help alot in improving the writing quality. For Character Design I think they were okay. Could have been described more what they looked like and also polish their personalities more. Overall I think this book is decent, it got air for improvement but with an Editor it should do much better. Otherwise the plot was nice imo.
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I have already downloaded a spell-checking app and as for an editor I cannot afford one, and in my place here, no one like a novel so I have no one to talk about this novel, Please just comment on the mistakes in a paragraph in chapter 1 and I will try to understand them
Rya_kishou:I recommend downloading a spell checking App, it already helps alot in identifying basic spelling /grammar mistakes, for the perfect polishing maybe look for an Editor or an online friend who is a native speaker in English, to help you grammar check. English is only my third language and while I'm already pretty good at it I still make quite a few mistakes, so I have an Editor looking over my chapters before release. If I had the time I would help you correct your chapters ,but im actually a really busy person irl so I'm sorry I can't. Again Tldr; spellchecking app like Word or an Editor or both. Good luck!>~<
I recommend downloading a spell checking App, it already helps alot in identifying basic spelling /grammar mistakes, for the perfect polishing maybe look for an Editor or an online friend who is a native speaker in English, to help you grammar check. English is only my third language and while I'm already pretty good at it I still make quite a few mistakes, so I have an Editor looking over my chapters before release. If I had the time I would help you correct your chapters ,but im actually a really busy person irl so I'm sorry I can't. Again Tldr; spellchecking app like Word or an Editor or both. Good luck!>~<
ok I will go over it tomorrow ,it's already past 4am and I gotta get some sleep đ đ I can't spell check everything tho and I can't promise that it will be perfect ,I myself have an Editor after all. I would do worse without him. So don't expect too much from me >~< now good night âĄ
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