Written as of chapter 5. Since it's starting way before any HP cannon events, it feels very fresh and exciting to experience the world of that time. It has a bit more grim dark heavy feeling to it than cannon, witch is to be expected at that age. The MC is still very young, but because her past she is well above her mental age. Witch makes it much more enjoyable to see her thoughts and interactions imo. The characters feel alive, and there dialogues real with there own personality. Grammar is easy to read and with very few errors. The only thing i would nitpick about, is the lack of building the immediate environment/surroundings in the scene changes. Does not need to be extensive, but just a little to build the "frame" of the picture at the very least. Like i said, this is a nitpick. Because it's not a complete lack of it, but just enough to make you feel a bit lost at times. Thank you Author! I hope to read and enjoy your novel for a long time ^^

It's an absolute delight to read it, you just connect with the characters you know, you don't care about morals or what's right or wrong(at least for me) you just care about how she lives, how she does things, her thoughts, her drive, it's simply amazing. You're brilliant and I look forward to reading more.

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This is honestly one of the best HP fanfics I've read. I love that fact that it takes an alternate route to the common going to Hogwarts fanfics. The main character has great personality and character development, and both the story and world building are fantastic. The only reason I didn't give it five stars is because I would like if the author posted more often, but in the end if they trade off better quality for more chapters I would say to stick with the higher quality chapters with less frequent posts.

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I don't read fanfics. But this story is really great. It is a Harry Potter fanfic, but plays before the books or Phantastic Beasts which I find is way better. The chapters don't come daily, but the writing quality is good and the chapters are long, so all good. The characters are cool and easy to imagine, I really like Grindelwald's and Destiny's relationship

the book is awesome so far, it's going great and although the chapters numbers are low right now the length of each chapter makes up for it, Just Pleeease don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Normally I don't read novel without some meta knowledge. But this even with topics that I don't normally like it's awesome. It kept me glued to the screen for as long as possible because I needed to read more. Congratulations.

A Good Book 👍 ......................... Of course I don't need to explain why, just go and read it if you want to know why.