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Francisco_Guevara_3950
Francisco_Guevara_3950Lv33yr
2021-12-07 08:07

me gusta la historia esta buena pero alguien más cree que el capítulo 32 no encaja con la historia porque parece exactamente a un capítulo de una historia de apolo que lei, amenos que sea solo yo si es asi entonces no se que pasa

[ Dios Hades ]

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Lameraverga2048_12
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Acepto la culpa :'c

3yr
MonokumaIzuru
MonokumaIzuruLv2

Esta historia la vas a seguir escribiendo? (La verdad me parece un muy interesante aunque tienes algunas palabras mal escrita y el capitulo 32 le falta hecerle una ediccion pqra darle mas contexto tal vez desde el POV de Hera y tambien he notado que falta mas interacciones con ella y Hades {y talvez un poco mas de Hestia} y siento que los capirulos necesitan un poco mas de conexion entre capitulos {como arcos}) y creo que eso seria todo (aunque me agrada la idea de un harem solamente por hera siento que se merecia algo mejor) Y con eso dicho buena historia esperare con ansias los siguientes capitulos ( si es que sigues escribiendo esta historia)[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Lameraverga2048_12:Acepto la culpa :'c
3yr
Lameraverga2048_12
Lameraverga2048_12Author

Si voy a continuar, solo que falta la inspiración :v

3yr
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Hmm como lo explico, primero sería bueno que subiera capítulos un poco mas seguido no se pero subes los caps después de 20 días y así, segundo la historia deberías hacer que Hades visite el tártaro para que consuma diversas almas y se haga mas fuerte luego que viaje a otros panteones de visita y seria bueno que el foco principal de la historia sea DXD

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