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MonokumaIzuru

MonokumaIzuru

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  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzuru20 days ago
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    Now that I realize it, wouldn't Nero almost be the daughter of Devas and Blake? hahaha this would be very funny for future interactions and I'm praying to the stars (not the gods... for reasons) for this to be a harem hahaha how fun.

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzurua month ago
    Replied to ImmortalCockroach

    Good luck with your story. I say goodbye

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzurua month ago
    Replied to ImmortalCockroach

    If 'omnipresent domain' allows a character to have multiple active bodies at the same time, sharing the same consciousness and ability to act, then, in practice, they are clones. The name you give it doesn’t change its functionality. If there really is a difference, it should be clearly and consistently explained. But if the only distinction is that you choose to call it something else, then there is no real difference—just a matter of terminology. That said, I’m not interested in continuing this debate. We simply have different points of view, and I’m only responding because you claimed I lack comprehension skills without even knowing me.

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzuru2 months ago
    Posted

    I don't like clones I hope you aren't offended by the short review.............................................................................

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzuru2 months ago
    Replied to Cussy_jackson

    I don’t want to spoil the story for you, but if you’re still curious, I’ll tell you. It’s your responsibility whether you decide to read this or not… I’ll have to remember because I don’t recall much. I know one of the reasons I stopped reading this is that the protagonist is cloning himself in containers or tubes to create alter egos and control everything (what a sociopath), and it’s a terrible decision because the clones can get out of control. However, the author and the protagonist always use the excuse that everything is under control. Additionally, those clones might have romantic relationships with other heroines, and I don’t like that scenario. I admit I have a bias against clones, so maybe my opinion is very subjective, but I can’t accept clones. There are already variants of the protagonist, cloning abilities (which the protagonist himself said were very dangerous and not to be used lightly…), which takes away value and importance from the protagonist. With clones in the story, the character loses his uniqueness, and the narrative becomes scattered, making his decisions and risks feel less significant. Moreover, if the clones act independently, it dilutes the emotional connection with the original protagonist. For me, this affects my interest in the story too much. That’s my opinion; if you want to keep reading, go ahead, but my mind can’t accept clones in any context.

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzuru3 months ago
    Posted

    I gave up after reaching chapter 67, and it’s not because I dislike the story; in fact, it would easily make it into my top 15 of the best stories I’ve read. But the clones... damn clones... I hate them so much. Clones, other bodies, self-divisions... I can’t stand them. My whole being rejects the concept; just thinking about it makes me want to vomit. Naruto fanfics traumatized me with the things clones are used for, and now I just can’t tolerate them. And the lack of concern the protagonist shows about them... it borders on arrogance. The author keeps insisting that nothing bad will happen, as if everything were so simple: “Oh, I’m paranoid, so it’s fine.” It feels like the dangers are being minimized, and no matter the type of clone, in my opinion, it’s still NTR. Nothing will make me change my mind about that. This is the biggest flaw in an otherwise great story. My personality and ideals completely clash with the concept of clones, so every chapter involving them became unbearable for me. I tried my best to endure it from the moment the protagonist copied Twice’s powers. When they said they wouldn’t use them much due to the risks, I managed to calm down. But now... I can’t take it anymore. I’ll do my best to forget this great story. It’s a shame because stories of this level are hard to find these days. I wish you the best with your writing! By the way, you mentioned in a chapter that your story deserves a 4.5, so, as the good Samaritan I am, I’ll help you with a star. Don’t worry, if later on you want me to remove my review, feel free to ask me. No hard feelings, but this is how I feel about my issue with the story. I’m also writing this review because, given what happened in One Piece, are those clones really necessary? It feels completely unnecessary to take that risk, especially considering that you can summon gacha characters to handle those tasks. But again, since the protagonist is paranoid, he’ll do it anyway. This approach will become very tiring and make things feel strange if you continue with it or if you’ve already done so.

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzuru7 months ago
    Replied to Angeltheweeb

    I speak on the subject of blood only hahaha[img=recommend]

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzuru7 months ago
    Replied to Lucas_Oliveira_2302

    I also think the same and if he does that it is very predictable.They can also create a clone.....although in the unlikely event that it's female*cough* Power Girl*cough* I wouldn't complain so much.

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzurua year ago
    Commented

    Una pregunta todavía habrá yanderes(?)?(era una cosa que engancho al instante jajaja y el drama y los celos)

  • MonokumaIzuru
    MonokumaIzuru2 years ago
    Replied to Dudedude5000

    I understand but I'm a bit lost on the subject of heroines (or I'm too stupid to understand hahaha) And it also leaves me with a bad taste, leave this criticism so tomorrow I will remove it permanently or maybe today I don't like leaving this type of criticism and adding the fact that it is your first story (although it would have been interesting if a female protagonist appeared as a certain manhua "I I became the villain of my video game" it's very funny, there are a lot of references even if you don't take it very seriously when you see it) Be sure to see how this story progresses in the meantime[img=recommend][img=recommend]