Review Detail of Kileks in RotMG: A Hero's Summoning

Hey~! Hey~! Author here. This will be the second novel I'm writing in tandem with my first: Monster Hunter: Wyvern's Wrath. It certainly won't be perfect, but I have interesting ideas for both that I would love to bring to fruition, and I will, so long as I can keep the motivation to do so. Tell me how you feel about it and where I can improve. As long as it's constructive and helps me as a writer, I can take it all. Also, I will delete spam and trolling off of the review page: I want none of that. So please, if you wish to support us and our fanfic, send one big fat review detailing all the things you love... or hate, that's fine too. 😭 Best Regards, HKK