I didn't read the whole thing but dropped it because there is one thing that I hate about this story is the system in it. so let me says this I hate system that just gives the mc too much different abilities while he still mastering the ones he already have or in some cases gives him powers that he is never going to use because he has too much already so it becomes pointless. other than that the fic is not bad the grammar is a bit good but yeah the system also talks most of the word count in each chapter
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LIKEMko:man I don't hate systems I just hate the system that gives the mc tons of stuff that never gets used but yeah that just my opinion not really something u should care about the real reason I give this low rating is bec of how the system is like 90% of the chapter resulting in me having to scroll down endlessly just for him to never use it you get what I mean
man I don't hate systems I just hate the system that gives the mc tons of stuff that never gets used but yeah that just my opinion not really something u should care about the real reason I give this low rating is bec of how the system is like 90% of the chapter resulting in me having to scroll down endlessly just for him to never use it you get what I mean
Tobi_or_Not_to_be:Hey there Tobi here just read your comment but there is literally a system tag on the book. Hope that you find your ideal books :)
Ahh, try chapter around the war arc and the one-piece arc the word count gours to around 2k words and the use of the system to describe is minimum the only reason it was so high earlier was to give all of its uses without having to make chapter explaining everything with no story for it.
Mko:man I don't hate systems I just hate the system that gives the mc tons of stuff that never gets used but yeah that just my opinion not really something u should care about the real reason I give this low rating is bec of how the system is like 90% of the chapter resulting in me having to scroll down endlessly just for him to never use it you get what I mean
Tobi_or_Not_to_be:Ahh, try chapter around the war arc and the one-piece arc the word count gours to around 2k words and the use of the system to describe is minimum the only reason it was so high earlier was to give all of its uses without having to make chapter explaining everything with no story for it.