nice

will do

Thanks man I will try my bes good luck on your side as well

BTW I meant the item that the system give him not the system itself

man I don't hate systems I just hate the system that gives the mc tons of stuff that never gets used but yeah that just my opinion not really something u should care about the real reason I give this low rating is bec of how the system is like 90% of the chapter resulting in me having to scroll down endlessly just for him to never use it you get what I mean

oh that what u meant I am sorry mate I thought u meant u got upset at me choosing Naruto Btw I never thought u were making fun of me I just didn't understand what u meant thanks for the clarification love ur fic btw but please make anything other than dxd

so um I am not really that good at English in fact i make fics to become better so can u explain what u mean because with my two remaining brain cells I came up with two things u could have meant either u liked it or not so can u please clarify so my small brain can understand

I didn't read the whole thing but dropped it because there is one thing that I hate about this story is the system in it. so let me says this I hate system that just gives the mc too much different abilities while he still mastering the ones he already have or in some cases gives him powers that he is never going to use because he has too much already so it becomes pointless. other than that the fic is not bad the grammar is a bit good but yeah the system also talks most of the word count in each chapter

beuh what low profile

oof

Good this is gold 10/10 the comedy is great hope to see more in the future good luck ps: please change the cover as it not reall y that go if u know what I mean

I will try but if I do make a harem it won't be that big because I feel if the harem is too big it just makes it pokemon as you said so 3 or maybe 5 st max no more

Good idea 10/10 the writing is also good I hope to see more chapters in the future if you can . ..............................................

nice

happy new year author

Don't have any high hopes as I suck at writing and mainly do this for fun and to improve my English I will however try to be creative if i can if you have any advise go ahead and say it just yeah don't completely destroy me

*bonk*

it okay I guess? I am not real sure I read the first 20 chapters didn't feel like it was for me there wasn't anything that really got me hooked on this It not bad it just not my kind of thing

bruh if he doesn't want to make it a harem leave him alone not everyone one likes to have a bunch of girls around them if you don't like the story just leave

Brush what bomb I said I will continue after some editing?