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2022-08-30 19:14

The cultivation ranks is very confusing tbh, and MC character is very annoying at all. For someone who keep saying that he is a forger, he is so hotblooded and always fight. Anyway, when I first read this novel. I really thought that it will be about forging and maybe some fights but instead, what I got is 95% fighting and 5% forging 😐

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