Im on chapter 8 and don't have a clue as to what is going on. The Mc is a beta male, who ran out into a pack of wolves and died immediately the moment the tutorial ended. Then we learn he's got a respawn ability so he doesn't have to fear death, then out of nowhere he gets a scythe from crafting and learned a "thunder and fire breathing technique" all of this happens off screen on floor 1.

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Bruh i am not even gonna talk about mcs actions at the start. How the f is he so low leveled after clearing floor 90 multiple times? I simply cant get over it. Decisions of mc also do not make sense half the time. Read at your own risk.

So I did read to chapter 77 and am here to say that the beginning is super, at least for me. It had really potential and was a good story. But after the SAO ark ,I’m going to name it like that, and the announcement that the MC is going to have a GOD complex, the story really took a down turn. Now It’s the whole time only, how awesome/powerful/beautiful he is and such a story isn’t my cup of tea. So I hope this was maybe helpful for someone. I also want to say at the end, that it may not be for me but you should at least give it a try because I myself have read up to somewhere around chapter 50 and have in joyed it. So it is definitely worth a try if only for the first part. Bye have a nice day you that is reading this.👋😊

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It's a fun read, compared to some of the other fanfictions posted on this site It's really good. The only thing that I disliked is that during the first 25 chapters there were a lot of cringy moments but if you ignore those It's not a bad fanfiction. The MC is super OP too so if you don't like that then don't read it.

I quite enjoyed the read so far the only problem would be the time skips( I understand there was no major plots before the main 2 year time skip in the anime ) and the fast paced . I only hope that you can slow down a little when the main plot starts appearing and give us a little longer POV's of the other main characters. other than that there's no problem in the ff ps. do you think you can make the mc play ggo before kirito to make a name/legend out of himself to make him a more mysterious character to kirito.

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good work