I have read the chapters released and I have to say that I want to find out what happens next. I will be sticking around to do just that. The writing quality is pretty good, and the story is paced well.

SO the prologue is not that great ill be honest , the Synopsis was a lot better than the prologue , i've talked to the author and even though he's new he knows a lot about writing , although the story is not that great now , but its only the first ten story , and lets be honest , we cannot judge most books through the first 20-40 chapters , so if i'm being honest we can expect a lot more from him .

I like where the story is going, it captures the attention of the readers well. There are a few grammatical errors, and the prologue is a bit heavy with exclamation marks. However, in general, this works is really interesting. Keep it up, author!

From what I've read, the story is pretty alright by my standards. It's a cliche tale of humanity having been struck by a tragedy that caused them to live in some post-modern apocalyptic era. The MC is your underdog whose goal is to rise and change the pitiful world full of corruption and chaos. For an author who's been writing for perhaps less than a month as I'm writing this, it's pretty good but on the general scale of what I've read over the years, I don't think it's super interesting. Not to mention the three chapters dedicated to the bathroom segment. A 5/10 story. May this story thrive as the author learns the ropes of this website.

Thanks for sharing the story with us, you should also add more development sections to your own stories (instead of skipping time, sections on army development, technology development, population development make it easier for you to write more chapters and provide a more detailed story

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it's a great book even though the beginning is a little bleak, I wanna stick around and see what the author has waiting for us , I honestly think this novel has a lot of promise

I'm really excited for what's to come! Though it's not been too many chapters, the author seems to have a clear undertsanding and confidence in not only their characters, but also the established lore behind them. This really shows through the progression of each chapter. I would personally prefer there be some more unique names to each chapter rather than a part 1 through 6, mainly due to the ability a chapter title has to set the tone early on - but that's a very minor detail. There's a lot of potential with this novel! Great things are to come!