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UnoriginalEgg
UnoriginalEggLv13yr
2021-11-08 10:10

I'll start off with the very basics. The cover is great and so is the synopsis. The synopsis itself got me pretty interested in this novel. The only real issue I have is with the writing quality. There are very few spelling flaws, but grammatical errors aren't uncommon. A few run-on sentences are the most common. Also, the first chapter is heavy in onomatopoeia, but the author made the effort to change that. The next chapter was a lot better and the chapters only continue to improve in quality. It's astonishing, really. The updates are coming out at a nice steady pace. The story isn't as developed yet as it's only in the first few chapters, but it's moving along nicely. The characters are introduced in a nice and smooth way, just like the setting. The world background is well made and the novel is quite descriptive. It drew me in and I really enjoyed how it made such a nice image in my mind. 9/10, highly recommend!

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