it is very good. There is an info dump at the beginning but just get through it. it's super good. if anyone disagrees
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LIKEdude there's like 15 chapters long info dump specially when the description for the continent hits, all thats missing is those families and such's underwear colors and how their farts might smell like, i fell asleep at some times because of the monotonous hyper detailed explanations, theres ecen maps and shit described to great details and i highly doubt that anyone will pull ouy a map drawn up just to cross reference whenever it's mentioned in the novel but the novel and the idea is great i personally dont like overdrawn super hyper focused info dumps that will literally be forgotten by readers almost immediately after because of how charged they are i mean first chapter is pretty much an 11 chapters long info dump with unecersary built in suspense
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