A novel with exceptional writing quality. However it has a huge flaw. Fanfics are made so that one can derail the plot either through an oc, knowledge or some other kind of influence. But the only thing this fanfic changes is the egg from the wave. It still follows the exact same plot as the novel and is extremely descriptive about the repetitive parts as well. I dont see the need to make the events already in the original almost exactly the same and really detailed as the original. Its supposed to be a FanFic not a snyder's cut to justice league.
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LIKEDon't get me wrong. There are a few changes including a slightly smarter naofumi but it still ultimately led to the same events.
so much thanks you . your review just save me my time a lot. I ain't reading this Fanfiction. your right what's the point if of fanfic if not mess around with the plot .
Late_Uchiha_clan:Don't get me wrong. There are a few changes including a slightly smarter naofumi but it still ultimately led to the same events.
