Review Detail of Carrot_Dude in Deranged Writer's Afterword (will be republished)
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Hello, the author here, As this is my first time writing a webnovel, there maybe several flaws in my writing. The first 5 chapters are used for setting up the world of the novel properly, so the pacing is a little slow. But after those 5 chapters, the novel goes in a comfortable pace. I got the inspiration to write this novel, from novel's like ' The Novel's Extra' and anime like, ' My Hero Academia', But it isn't exactly alike. Only the basic premise is similar and it is it's own thing. Also I got the inspiration for the power system from the novel ' The Author's POV' I mentioned this in the comments earlier but decided to add it into the review since people didn't read the comment. As I said earlier, the plot is completely different though. Comment your thoughts on how to improve the story. Happy Reading !!!
Deranged Writer's Afterword (will be republished)
Carrot_Dude
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Technically, fiction needs common sense and logic. How can you create a good character, plot, and setting if both of them are missing, wouldn't that be called nonsense and not fiction? I'm not saying to make it more like a reality, it just needs common sense and logic together with your fantasies. In addition, harem or not, what important is how can you make the story interesting. I suggest to just respect each others preference, and move on if the story isn't fit to your liking.
The_Anonymous_User:I agree, because fiction is fiction not reality, and fiction is created to satisfy the masses who is unsatisfied with reality thats why they create fiction and fantasy. so why do idiots keep complaining about logic and commonsense in a fiction?, that doesn't make sense right?, its fiction after all, even if the harem is sometimes created illogically it still make sense if its a fiction. so if someone keeps complaining about logic in a fiction then please go to the one who write reality not fiction.
well..that is a complicated question. I can't say for sure what route I'll take as it isn't set in stone. I do like a good harem but it's very easy to ruin the novel if you mess it up. Whatever way it goes, I'll try to do justice to the novelđđ
shashank_panthri:just tell me one thing, is this gonna have a harem? Please say yes.
I have always been disappointed whenever I have read a novel with just a single love interest. The thing in itself is moronic. How can someone just love one person for 1000 years when we humans find ourselves looking for someone else after merely 100. And this is a novel FICTION, and I don't want it to limit itself to fit the current reality.
Carrot_Dude:well..that is a complicated question. I can't say for sure what route I'll take as it isn't set in stone. I do like a good harem but it's very easy to ruin the novel if you mess it up. Whatever way it goes, I'll try to do justice to the novelđđimage
shashank_panthri:I have always been disappointed whenever I have read a novel with just a single love interest. The thing in itself is moronic. How can someone just love one person for 1000 years when we humans find ourselves looking for someone else after merely 100. And this is a novel FICTION, and I don't want it to limit itself to fit the current reality.
shashank_panthri:I have always been disappointed whenever I have read a novel with just a single love interest. The thing in itself is moronic. How can someone just love one person for 1000 years when we humans find ourselves looking for someone else after merely 100. And this is a novel FICTION, and I don't want it to limit itself to fit the current reality.
then by your logic isn't it moronic for the wives in the harem to somehow not get bored and leave to look for another husband or not have harems themselves?
shashank_panthri:I have always been disappointed whenever I have read a novel with just a single love interest. The thing in itself is moronic. How can someone just love one person for 1000 years when we humans find ourselves looking for someone else after merely 100. And this is a novel FICTION, and I don't want it to limit itself to fit the current reality.
I agree, because fiction is fiction not reality, and fiction is created to satisfy the masses who is unsatisfied with reality thats why they create fiction and fantasy. so why do idiots keep complaining about logic and commonsense in a fiction?, that doesn't make sense right?, its fiction after all, even if the harem is sometimes created illogically it still make sense if its a fiction. so if someone keeps complaining about logic in a fiction then please go to the one who write reality not fiction.
shashank_panthri:I have always been disappointed whenever I have read a novel with just a single love interest. The thing in itself is moronic. How can someone just love one person for 1000 years when we humans find ourselves looking for someone else after merely 100. And this is a novel FICTION, and I don't want it to limit itself to fit the current reality.
