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    Miden1yr
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    Out of all the fanfics I've read, this is by far the most well-written one. Unlike other writers, you have successfully captured the intricacies of Ayanokoji's character and portrayed his intellect and complex thoughts with ease. Additionally, the grammar is consistent and well-managed, which makes the story even more enjoyable to read. You have added a twist to the plot and crafted conversations that are true to each character's personality. I am surprised that this fanfic has not gained as much popularity as the others that are filled with hormonal teenagers and self-indulgent desires. I sincerely hope that you will not abandon this work, but if you ever lose motivation, please consider providing a satisfying ending. Thank you for your work! (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

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    TBATE : A Masterpiece
    Others · Reprobate69_1
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    Miden1yr
    Commented
    [Ding…]
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    The Most Generous Master Ever
    Eastern · Su Yu
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  • Miden
    Miden1yr
    Commented

    Is the story still ongoing or drop?

    Ch 45 True colors
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    Villain Will Destroy The Story
    Fantasy · nemusislol
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    Miden1yr
    Commented

    and then they kissed

    He gently lifted his head which was facing the ground so that they were only inches apart and Orion could feel his breat.h Orion wiped the tears from the Derret's handsome face with his sleeve and looked into his black eyes. Derret did the same.
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    Villain Will Destroy The Story
    Fantasy · nemusislol
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  • Miden
    Miden1yr
    Replied to The_Anonymous_User

    Technically, fiction needs common sense and logic. How can you create a good character, plot, and setting if both of them are missing, wouldn't that be called nonsense and not fiction? I'm not saying to make it more like a reality, it just needs common sense and logic together with your fantasies. In addition, harem or not, what important is how can you make the story interesting. I suggest to just respect each others preference, and move on if the story isn't fit to your liking.

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    Deranged Writer's Afterword (will be republished)
    Fantasy · Carrot_Dude
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    Miden1yr
    Replied to dukkeh

    Some people just can't tolerate the mc having a harem even if they already progressed throughout the story. It's exactly what it says, "it's a personal preference". There is nothing illogical about it, not all males want to have a harem. Eventually, there will be a time when some people will realize that harem isn't as wonderful as they thought would be, and it's called maturity. To put it simply, someday you will learn how to tame your dick and snap back to reality. I am by no means pointing out that harem lovers are a bunch of immature horny delusional people. I'm just saying some will grow tired of a harem.

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    ARIFURETA: The Otherworldly Alchemist
    Anime & Comics · ArdoAleister
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  • Miden
    Miden2yr
    Replied to GeneralLuficer

    Author: Might not be a harem or maybe it will be. Who knows? Also me: Might as well read it or maybe not read it. Who knows? Seriously, it's a bother if the author can't make up his/her mind if it's going to be a harem or not.

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    The Strongest Naruto Uzumaki
    Anime & Comics · HumblePoet
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    Miden2yr
    Commented

    He acts like one of those typical harem members when they spent a day with the protagonist.

    He rubbed the pendant with one hand as he clasped the feathers that he had hidden next to his chest. It was comforting—it made him feel like Celine was right there beside him.  
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    Advent of the Archmage
    Games · Mo Xiang
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    Miden2yr
    Replied to TruckkunJr

    well, I can agree with that hahaha.

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    Infinite Stratos 2nd Male Student.
    Anime & Comics · KidSpeech
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    Miden2yr
    Replied to TruckkunJr

    hmm... I don't think so. I think it's unique. I believe that you can make an interesting story without having a sexual or romantic relationship with girls, but I still prefer if there's romance.

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    Infinite Stratos 2nd Male Student.
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