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RaiFen33
RaiFen33Lv142yr
2022-05-12 09:59

I was enjoying this novel even with its few inconsistencies here and there but then around chapter 100, the names of everything including people, cultivation, items all changed. It basically became unreadable because one moment someone goes from Jack to Caesar, or they're at the realm of great mage level 12 now they're at the realm of innate level 8. I DONT UNDERSTAND WHATS GOING ON. The quality has also gone down so much, so many grammar mistakes filling this novel. I tried too adapt but I have my limits, it gets worse the further you read.

Becoming An Ancestor In Another World From This Day On

Magic Principal
4.2
398 Chs

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Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

There's another one with the MC reincarnaing into a satellite in another world for millions of years then after "dying" he reincarnated into an ancestor of a clan in that world. There's even a Manhau based on it. And read Lord Of Enigma, rest is translated elsewhere.

3yr

TheVoidLord
TheVoidLordLv11

Raw?........................................................................................................................................

3yr
zoron
zoronLv1

This novel could have been great but it suffers from a "tribulation:" that a lot of these discreet ancestor novels face.. the main character not being the main character. See if you dont know what that means let me explain, in this novel it feels as if the MC is a side character in multiple other people's story and it does not really change and as the story goes along the ONLY thing he does is to vaguely get stronger (though we never really see the effects of that due to him relying on the system) and helping his descendants and thats it, there is really nothing that benefits him other than faith in which he invests back into his descendants. So dont waste your fast passes.

3yr
GrandpaPeng
GrandpaPengLv4

Very similar to Ancestor Above. Basically.. bland characters that seem to have no life of their own, it's wonder how they survived without ancestor (it's like MC growing NPCs). They don't even ask themselves whether it's really ancestor or some demon/devil from other realm. There are also overused expressions and everything being solved by the system. MC is pretty much a slave to his system (system gives "advice" or "discounts" at the right time and he just buys/uses/saves/solves). I have yet to see a very solid novel of this genre with MC-ancestor that has no body and acts as as family protector with proper conversation flow and characters build up. But that would require an experienced author who can write good novels without systems, like the author of Protect Our Patriarch (mtl). POP is a very very good novel (focuses on growing family up in a quite realistic way), the problem is - it's quite niche, it has different feel than other novels. After just a couple dozen chapters there are a few family members younger than the patriarch that could easily take over as main characters if the MC was ever killed or whatever.

3yr
Dallas_Kramer
Dallas_KramerLv15

The novel started off pretty good, in my opinion. Unfortunately, at some point the consistency of the story fell apart. The name of one of the characters changed for a chapter. The realms of power changed from mage, great mage, great archmage, divine, ect. to body, innate, divine, then legendary (I think? Hard to keep track with the switches). The MC also has his own special realms for cultivation that also changed. It just got to be too much of a problem for me to enjoy the read.

2yr
DaoistZdxwmt
DaoistZdxwmtLv11

does anyone have the raws after 259? i can only find images which i cant put through google translate. .

3yr
Preston_Garvey
Preston_GarveyLv6

magic... then cultivation??????¿?????¿??¿¿¿¿???????¿?????¿????????¿??¿¿?¿¿????????????????????????¿?????¿??¿¿¿¿???????¿?????¿????????¿??¿¿?¿¿??????????????????

2yr
Ankur_Singhal_3853
Ankur_Singhal_3853Lv3

cultivation realm are switching repeatedly, can't understand the power level..

2yr
Artimis1
Artimis1Lv6

I read raw and I found translator made new novel from orginal . why webnovel become like this where's their respect for what author write.😞😞😞😞😞😨😞😞😞😞😨😞😨😨😨😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞

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