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akirakunz
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2021-12-25 07:43

3 stars because the world background isn't bad, translation too and because we have dragons. But let's talk about story and character design ...... The story is full of cliche and predictable, i won't spoil too much but you have the cliche of the young master coming back and noticing that the mc is liked by the girl the young master like ....(sorry i don't know how to turn this sentence so it's pretty bad xD) Character Design : the mc is your typical transmigrator who get a cheat and who instantly transform into someone acting like an arrogant, stupid child who think he is invincible when he know nothing of this world. Let's wait for the next 20 chapters but i don't have much hope anymore for this novel.

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Salmon_El_Solomon
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If you like to read Chinese novels, i recommend this one Villain: Peeking at the Diary, the Heroines Are All Set Up, the introduction is a little wrong, but the novel is very fun.

akirakunz
akirakunzLv4

i will check it thx

Salmon_El_Solomon:If you like to read Chinese novels, i recommend this one Villain: Peeking at the Diary, the Heroines Are All Set Up, the introduction is a little wrong, but the novel is very fun.
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