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Primordial_Origin
Primordial_OriginLv23yr
2021-12-07 03:33

Wrote this review after finishing Chapter 30: Great story and very entertaining. I love MC's personality, chosen background, and powers. Like the time chosen to get born as well. So, I'd would say the story is kind of unique concept for a Solo Leveling fic. Though, I do have read only few of it to based upon, still I have read a lot of other fics enough to know what a good story is from not based on my experience. This story is one those very much worth. Great comedy scenes, one of the few ones that really made me audibly laugh. Really love the comedic sense of the author. Has few and minor grammar or typos. But nothing that could destroy writing experience. Decent pacing for me. Though some chapters do feel a little rushed like the one chapter worth of fighting for Kamish, not really bad but could have certainly been better if done with another or maybe even two chapters for such a close to ending boss level monster in Solo Leveling World. The sudden World Hopping event feels like kind of too fast as well. But, I especially like the beginning chapters and one of the another few ones as well for me wherein I liked the childhood or growing up stage of the MC. Hope author continue to writes this story and not drop it. Thank you for writing this story!

Solo Leveling: The New Ruler

ForgeCoffee
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ForgeCoffee
ForgeCoffeeAuthor

I've been waiting for an actual review, and one finally appeared! True, your points do hold weight. Especially with the Kamish Arc (I might edit it) The World hopping part was quick since I figured the readers wouldn't like it. I mean, it essentially isn't Solo Leveling anymore; in a sense. But thanks for the review, God knows I've been waiting for onw that didn't contain "..." and spam letters

3yr
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Primordial_Origin
Primordial_OriginLv2

Really like your story so I just gave my honest thoughts about it, hope my review does help your story get even better. Thanks for writing again. P.S. I do get what you said about the World Hopping part, keep it as much as pure Solo Leveling fic then you can start exploring more once you've finished the entire canon story.

ForgeCoffee:I've been waiting for an actual review, and one finally appeared! True, your points do hold weight. Especially with the Kamish Arc (I might edit it) The World hopping part was quick since I figured the readers wouldn't like it. I mean, it essentially isn't Solo Leveling anymore; in a sense. But thanks for the review, God knows I've been waiting for onw that didn't contain "..." and spam letters
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Moshi~ Moshi~ Shameless author giving myself a 5 Star Review! Tell me your thoughts, opinion, suggestions, or whatever it is that you find in my Fanfic! Hope you guys enjoy this fanfic too! After writing the MHA fanfic, I was able to notice the faults in my grammar and writing thanks to you guys, so help out here too! CHEERS!

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DaoOfGluttony
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although I don't know if it's goona be amazing or bad I'm still gonna rate it 5 star cause why not and author is this gonna be romance ?? if yes please ship Kara and the solo leveling ml cause I forgot his name cause it's been a long time since I read it and have a good week author

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Good story but I hope the author - san doesn't add Romance,Because it only messes up the story,Please add "Demension Chat Group" Possibility to be interesting,Maybe other Anime worlds too,It's up to you the author -san

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So far so good! I haven't seen a lot of good solo leveling fanfic especially one with a flugel race, I haven't even seen much flugel fanfic in general so I am hoping this turns out good.

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If it is from Dao, then it will surely be good! I don't find much female lead fanfics, and most aren't bad but not great either. So far, I have only found two good ones, and I'm loving them! I haven't really searched for any solo leveling fanfics, so I guess I'll be giving my first to this one.

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I waited a bit before the giving a review to see how it’s going but it’s definitely great! It’s the first story I open the morning and one of the reason I don’t go back to sleep ahah

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