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2022-02-19 23:25

I put spoilers for if you are never read this novel, I advice that don't read this comment if you didn't read chapter 42 I waited and searched for a novel like this long time. It has few grammar mistakes but the with writing abilities and creativity ( except naming ) is very good.I hope Author-san continue write novels like this. I love Mc characteristic but I feel like it will be finish soon ( I'm writing this comment after reading ch 42 ) . I think you can put some extra characters because you changed worlds settings ( like hunters uses monster cores and develo themself ) . maybe more events with new characters ( Maybe new monarchs and new monsters or a strong being come to this universe from another universe ( they are bad examples but hop you understand ) ) and with the less time skip will be better (I think ) Thanks for the novel Author-san

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Totally agree

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