Wrote this review after finishing Chapter 30: Great story and very entertaining. I love MC's personality, chosen background, and powers. Like the time chosen to get born as well. So, I'd would say the story is kind of unique concept for a Solo Leveling fic. Though, I do have read only few of it to based upon, still I have read a lot of other fics enough to know what a good story is from not based on my experience. This story is one those very much worth. Great comedy scenes, one of the few ones that really made me audibly laugh. Really love the comedic sense of the author. Has few and minor grammar or typos. But nothing that could destroy writing experience. Decent pacing for me. Though some chapters do feel a little rushed like the one chapter worth of fighting for Kamish, not really bad but could have certainly been better if done with another or maybe even two chapters for such a close to ending boss level monster in Solo Leveling World. The sudden World Hopping event feels like kind of too fast as well. But, I especially like the beginning chapters and one of the another few ones as well for me wherein I liked the childhood or growing up stage of the MC. Hope author continue to writes this story and not drop it. Thank you for writing this story!
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I've been waiting for an actual review, and one finally appeared! True, your points do hold weight. Especially with the Kamish Arc (I might edit it) The World hopping part was quick since I figured the readers wouldn't like it. I mean, it essentially isn't Solo Leveling anymore; in a sense. But thanks for the review, God knows I've been waiting for onw that didn't contain "..." and spam letters
Really like your story so I just gave my honest thoughts about it, hope my review does help your story get even better. Thanks for writing again. P.S. I do get what you said about the World Hopping part, keep it as much as pure Solo Leveling fic then you can start exploring more once you've finished the entire canon story.
