Review Detail of Maya_Grey in Story has been re-uploaded: "Gene Era: Breath of Evolution"

Item: Story has been re-uploaded: "Gene Era: Breath of Evolution"
Rating: 5

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Maya_GreyLv22yrMaya_Grey

A proper cover page is missing here, Mister Author. Your story is exceptional! Had a good time and waiting for more. I love nicely designed characters, Seth is a real hero, Alice and Chloe are interesting too. The storyline is captivating. Just don't like the 'system' stuff, but it has a really huge potential.

Story has been re-uploaded: "Gene Era: Breath of Evolution"

YoanRoturier

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Maya_GreyLv2Maya_Grey

I don't like everything connected to it, like popping windows, gaining powers, skills, etc.

YoanRoturier:Thanks, I'll work on the cover page at a later date. Gotta find the perfect image. If I may ask, what don't you like about the system so that I can improve? Or is it just system stories aren't your cup of tea?

2yr

YoanRoturierAuthorYoanRoturier

Thanks, I'll work on the cover page at a later date. Gotta find the perfect image. If I may ask, what don't you like about the system so that I can improve? Or is it just system stories aren't your cup of tea?

2yr

ExiledLv14Exiled

Hey! Enjoying your woodcutter book and thinking about starting this one. Tho, I Need to Know if you plan on having a harem. I personally despise harems so I stay away from any books that contain them

YoanRoturier:Thanks, I'll work on the cover page at a later date. Gotta find the perfect image. If I may ask, what don't you like about the system so that I can improve? Or is it just system stories aren't your cup of tea?

2yr