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Maya_Grey

Maya_Grey

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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Replied to Maya_Grey

    I also have a very mixed impression of these two FL friends. They seem to want to help her, but are they really helping her, to find her feelings again? Pushing her, despite the values she holds, into the arms of the mysterious man. This is a very typically masculine approach. It won't solve her worries. On the contrary. What if, on top of that, she loses her self-respect? I'm waiting for the continuation. So many questions to be answered. What’s happened with her ex? Will the FL surprise the one who was the reason for this spark in her eyes?

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    Urban · Juliett_Juliett
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Posted

    Most of us are 'human zombies' driven only by the will to survive, by the lust for success, money, and fame. Reality. I feel sorry for both of the main characters. They both got lost somewhere along the way, but that's very human. There's little difference between the two.

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    Urban · Juliett_Juliett
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    I wonder why Alex is afraid of Jo

    Alex, not stopping from kissing Jo, carried her out of the toilet. As soon as he closed the door with his foot, he immediately placed her on the floor and began to smooth out her messy hair.
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    Urban · Juliett_Juliett
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
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    "The only thing I remember about her are her long slender legs. I didn't see her face."
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented
    'If you just knew how much you drive me crazy.' It was hard for him to refrain from taking care of her neck, which was just at the level of his mouth. He wanted to teach her a lesson that this was not how men should be treated.
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented
    "Shut up, asshole!" She whispered into his ear, and he felt her warm breath on his neck.
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    Urban · Juliett_Juliett
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented
    "This is supposed to be a deal? Do you remember?" Jo asked looking at his shiny eyes. "Did you drink too much?" As she spoke, she realized that the marriage proposal might have been spontaneous, but not the ring. It was a planned action. She was even more devastated.
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    more about the agreement, please

    "Having our informal agreement here…" He took a deep breath before continuing. "I thought we might as well make it more formal."
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    so sweet

    "Will you do me the honor of spending the rest of your life with me, badass? Will you marry me?" He asked in a very serious tone.
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    Urban · Juliett_Juliett
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    is he going to propose?

    'Wtf?' She had only one thought in her head at that moment, looking at Alex kneeling next to her with an open red box in his hand. There was a ring inside it.
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    that's impressive is she still slim?

    As she was about to reach for the fourth slice of cake, she felt a gentle tug on her right sleeve.
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    what did she do?

    "Is that why you choked him?" Patrick asked in a serious tone.
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    That's a good way to watch some of the shows at Netflix :)

    They sat like that for several minutes in silence. She watched her show, mostly on preview.
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    What do you guys want from that show? It's not bad!

    She seemed to be completely oblivious to Luke's presence. She began to browse on Netflix. Finally, she turned on the final season of Manifest.
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    Is any new chapter on the way?

    Ch 3 After party
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey1yr
    Commented

    Waiting for more...

    Ch 7 Chapter Six: The Setup
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    Lost Treasure: A churchmouse dream
    Fantasy · DelphineIU
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey2yr
    Posted

    Wow!!! Great beginning of the story! I like your main character as the girl has a really strong personality. The storyline is interesting. Good work, Author!

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    Not at all book
    Fantasy · The_brightest_star
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey2yr
    Posted

    Wow!!! Beautiful cover page <3 I only started the book (read 15 chaps, will continue during this weekend), but I can honestly say that the story is written very well. I wouldn't mind having a paper copy. Love Alice <3

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    Anemones
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey2yr
    Posted

    A good read so far... waiting for more chapters. You, dear Author, should classify your story in a different genre :D Harem would be more appropriate. Your main character has so many good-looking guys around.

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    The bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • Maya_Grey
    Maya_Grey2yr
    Replied to YoanRoturier

    I don't like everything connected to it, like popping windows, gaining powers, skills, etc.

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    Story has been re-uploaded: "Gene Era: Breath of Evolution"
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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