Review Detail of bigpollo in Godly crafter in DxD
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Mc is a smart Idiot that is somewhat naive but also jaded? He seems to be okay with abuse against him and is basically a doormat to his family. He is also 10 so… the story is okay but the format is weird af. hope author don’t delete this because They needs some criticism. Mc is also very plastic in his design and there are so many Plotholes. the mc is a walking one. good lUck
Godly crafter in DxD
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umm? doormat to his family? what you want him to break out in unreasonable rage and slaughter them?.. his family was indifferent, so he hid his talent and chose his own path.. just shows he isnt that petty.. not every one if a year 8 with an anime mental disorder, if he did get revenge on his family for there indifference then that would be one dimensional.. lol.. and the fact that the gremgory family treated him like that especially rias in the first place is a huge plot hole... no not a plot hole just straight poorly written forced plot... clearly the author didnt pay much attention to peoples personalities from the original work.
Honestly the author just set it up in a way where any choice the mc makes seems irrational based on his experiences. but yeah i mean doormat in the fact that he will probably never do “anything” to his “family” and will continue to justify what they do by the worlds standards or devil culture. its kinda sad but im just a reader so…
Pork:umm? doormat to his family? what you want him to break out in unreasonable rage and slaughter them?.. his family was indifferent, so he hid his talent and chose his own path.. just shows he isnt that petty.. not every one if a year 8 with an anime mental disorder, if he did get revenge on his family for there indifference then that would be one dimensional.. lol.. and the fact that the gremgory family treated him like that especially rias in the first place is a huge plot hole... no not a plot hole just straight poorly written forced plot... clearly the author didnt pay much attention to peoples personalities from the original work.
Why is this a plothole? In the book she is suffering from an inferiority complex because her parents keep comparing her to her twin while at the same time she is being brainwashed by the servents that the mc is garbage. It makes perfect sense she is out to get him especially when she is like what, 9-10 years old or younger?
Pork:umm? doormat to his family? what you want him to break out in unreasonable rage and slaughter them?.. his family was indifferent, so he hid his talent and chose his own path.. just shows he isnt that petty.. not every one if a year 8 with an anime mental disorder, if he did get revenge on his family for there indifference then that would be one dimensional.. lol.. and the fact that the gremgory family treated him like that especially rias in the first place is a huge plot hole... no not a plot hole just straight poorly written forced plot... clearly the author didnt pay much attention to peoples personalities from the original work.
what do you mean abuse his family only treated him like air which he does the same to them letter down the line and what do you mean plot holes can you point out a few as for the plot hole about Rias my man she is like 10 and has inferiority complex this is not like the other fanfic where your sister will love you to the point of want to marry the mc and she was also brainwashed by servents and her family so of course, he will show haughty attitude towards mc.